The eye like objects move closer, making there frills shake like the waves of the sea making movement as if it was retreating then lurching forward, the sudenly the become as bright as the sun for a second then fades into the darkness
. . . I am having so much trouble parsing your sentences.
Right, let's start with a non-aggression pact. We agree not to take violent action against each other's nations, sound good? Snow picks up a clipboard, very gently, with her teeth; she puts it on the table facing Andro. Everything's ready to sign if you so wish.
Ooc: well apologies, I'm just used on slapping down some metaphors and a sliighly detailed perception of a scene which I don't even know why I do it.
IC:"Of course, I am in deeply agree with this."Andro says as she put the clipboard on front of Andro, he reads it for a while before signing the clipboard with his pen that he took from his jacket. "Here you go."Andro said after he signed the non-aggression pact between them.
no offense, but i think the trouble with these posts and why brethren can’t properly understand them is due to a few key reasons:
tense switches (present, then past; stick with present for this rp) gender switches (somehow) just bad sentences (“andro says as she put the clipboard on front of andro”) all in one go (you should use the return key to break up sentences for maximum ease of reading)
so, to improve your last post, here’s a suggestion:
(i’m going to assume andro is a guy)
"Of course, I am in deep agreement with this,” Andro says as he put the clipboard in front of him. He reads it for a while before signing it with a pen he took from his jacket. “Here you go,” Andro says after signing the non-aggression pact.
OOC: It's not the detail and metaphor, it's the grammar. I'll try to stop whining about it.
IC: Thank you. Snow signs it too, with a pen designed for large paw-hands like her own, and puts it aside. If I may ask, what is your nation's stance on socialists and nonhuman sapients? -The official stance and, perhaps more important, the one average people adhere to.
IC: "As a monarchy and as a king, I must understand what are the beliefs and ways people believe into, if they are heading on the wrong path, we must take responsibility and to guide them in the right way. A leader isn't born to be bowed down by its people right? The king/queen is born to serve its people as he/she has the capability to lead its nation, hence my stance on socialists are neutral, I don't hate them, I don't like them either, as even one of my parties in the government have some of a socialist point towards the government." Andro said.
"And for nonhuman sapients, this also tackles the race discrimination on the human races as well, Statistically speaking, our GNI(if you're wondering thats a discrimination/inequality rate of a nation) is on the low side, we accept different kinds of races, whether it be a Nekomimi, a Fortiscarab or whatsoever, We value life as it also says in the beliefs of Tunseism, our religon, that Impelanta values everything that has life. And we do the same though, there are still people in my nation who discriminates, the majority of my people are still heart-warming and welcoming to other races in this world. He added, giving out a somewhat a happy and a contended smile on his face as he took a sip of his tea after.
Boogie Woogie Bugle Boy The Andrews Sisters He was a famous trumpet man from out Chicago way He had a boogie style that no one else could play He was the top man at his craft But then his number came up, and he was gone with the draft He's in the army now, a-blowin' reveille He's the boogie woogie bugle boy of Company B They made him blow a bugle for his Uncle Sam It really brought him down because he couldn't jam The captain seemed to understand Because the next day the cap' went out and drafted a band And now the company jumps when he plays reveille He's the boogie woogie bugle boy of Company B A-toot, a-toot, a-toot-diddleyada-toot He blows it eight-to-the-bar, in boogie rhythm He can't blow a note unless the bass and guitar is playin' with him He makes the company jump when he plays reveille He's the boogie woogie bugle boy of Company B He was our boogie woogie bugle boy of Company B And when he plays boogie woogie bugle, he was buzy as a 'bzz' bee And when he plays, he makes the company jump eight-to-the-bar He's the boogie woogie bugle boy of Company B Toot-toot-toot, toot-diddleyada, toot-diddleyada Toot, toot, he blows it eight-to-the-bar He can't blow a note if the bass and guitar isn't with him A-a-a-and the company jumps when he plays reveille He's the boogie woogie bugle boy of Company B He puts the boys asleep with boogie every night And wakes 'em up the same way in the early bright They clap their hands and stamp their feet Because they know how he plays when someone gives him a beat He really breaks it up when he plays reveille He's the boogie woogie bugle boy of Company B Da-doo-da, da-doo-da-da, da Da-doo-da, da-doo-da-da, da Da-doo-da, da-doo-da-da, da Da-doo-da, da-doo-da-da A-a-a-and the company jumps when he plays reveille He's the boogie woogie bugle boy of Company B!
Submitted by Volinovia "Boogie Woogie Bugle Boy" is a song which became a major hit for The Andrews Sisters and an iconic World War II tune that first appeared in the Abbott & Costello comedy film, Buck Privates. It reached number six on the U.S. pop singles chart in early 1941. The song is ranked No. 6 on Songs of the Century. Bette Midler's 1972 recording of the song also reached the top ten on the U.S. Billboard Hot 100.
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Snow nods slowly. That's good enough for this nonhuman socialist at least, ha ha. She says 'ha ha' like words, not making any physical sound with them -- dragons do laugh, but foreigners tend to mistake the sound for aggression and/or falling rocks. It sounds like there will be few significant obstacles to our nations' cooperation in the future, and it might not be unreasonable to consider you an ally on certain issues. Now, do you have questions about the Congregation?
Volinovia "Boogie Woogie Bugle Boy" is a song which became a major hit for The Andrews Sisters and an iconic World War II tune that first appeared in the Abbott & Costello comedy film, Buck Privates. It reached number six on the U.S. pop singles chart in early 1941. The song is ranked No. 6 on Songs of the Century. Bette Midler's 1972 recording of the song also reached the top ten on the U.S. Billboard Hot 100. 
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