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SC "Commend Kelssek" Voting Overview


Current Proposal: Commend Kelssek

Overview

Proposal:
This proposal aims to commend Kelssek for their contributions in the General Assembly, the Olympic Games and their work in the East Pacific.

Opinions:

For:

Vrijstaat limburg wrote:“Despite Some of the less than savoury things Kelssek’s representatives may or may not have said in the past, we recognize their contributions in the field of NationStates Sports, and feel that they would be deserving of a commendation. The Free State votes for the proposal.”

Princess mi amore cadenza wrote:This has our full support, obviously. Kelssek is a valuable member of the NS Sports community and is fully deserving of this commendation.

Against:

Qvait wrote:While the proposed resolution has a somewhat solid RP component to it, the list of positions the subject has served as part of The East Pacific with no mention of their particular relevance undercuts the strength of the proposal. The author could improve the proposal by elaborating on the relevance of the subject serving in these positions or omitting the section entirely.

HumanSanity wrote:The more I think about it, I just become more skeptical of this proposal. I think the nominee is deserving but the writing is haphazard in some parts and generally lacks narrative and structure. It falls more than almost any other resolution for the "time to list some things" flaw, as it essentially consists of a list of UN/GA resolutions, a list of sports hostings and sports victories, and then a very very sloppy laundry list of every position they ever held in TEP. At no point does it create narrative and the TEP section in particular is sloppy, as positions do not equate to contributions.

I'm against with a "go back, fix the writing, and try again" theme

Abstain:

Concrete Slab wrote:The delegation from Concrete Slab is conflicted on how to vote when it comes to this proposal. We agree with many of the sentiments of the good ambassador from Qvait, but still think the proposed recipient of this commendation has some merits.

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